Hahaahah! thats awsome =] i loved it! 5/5

~tia

Lol. I love funny poems. They bring a smile to my face. This one was unique in a way. Which made it funnier. Um, I love the ending.. SPLAT! Nice job using your title in such a wonderful way. Keep writing! I don't know where to stop reading your poetry!! 5/5

I'm a horsefly too ;)

Aw! This was too cute! I don't like bugs and I really hate spiders, but you described them as something cute in this poem. It was wonderful to read this. :)

Hahahahahahaha that was hilarious.... (: Good job!