by Miakoda Jun 18, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
If love is fair |
by Dan
Nice poem. I especially liked the 3rd stanza. It sort of just stood out for me. It was a very good read for me so keep on writing. |
by Simply Josh
Nice poem. I liked the format of it and how it progressed. It's an enjoyable read and I like how you answered the questions and life can certainly be an open book if we actually look :) Good job |