by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion Jun 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
This day makes me cry |
Aww... i can relate. the closest person in the world to me was killed by his father so this really goes deep. but i really liked ity flowed well and your last two lines i loved. |
by Jessie
Omg That is so depressing, I just want to give you a hug. Losing loved ones is soo hard |
by Sora
This poem is lovely. very deep very heartfelt. you did an amazing job at expressing yourself, well done. poems like these i enjoy reading the most. keep up the great work. you have a good talent. 5/5. |
by rob
Touching... great emotion.. R |
Omg thats sad did he really die oh man i wanna cry now really good though |