This poem is sad and it made me think of my own angel that watches me my friend took her own life just b 4 she turned 27 this year and this poems hits me hard thank u for sharing it with us great work love it 5/5

Tammi,

Hey hun only me (stacey) i love the last stanza its good hope ur ok?? xoxoxox

Aww its so sad T^T

wonderfully written and flowed wonderfully! =)

That is sooo sad it was wonderful =)

Great flow, brings tears to my eyes because i've also went through the same situation. Nicely done, 5/5

Omg thats sad did he really die oh man i wanna cry now really good though

Touching... great emotion.. R

This poem is lovely. very deep very heartfelt. you did an amazing job at expressing yourself, well done. poems like these i enjoy reading the most. keep up the great work. you have a good talent. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Omg That is so depressing, I just want to give you a hug. Losing loved ones is soo hard

Aww... i can relate. the closest person in the world to me was killed by his father so this really goes deep. but i really liked ity flowed well and your last two lines i loved.

"Boy know your my angel
and you'll never fall from grace"