I'm young, and I have so many years awaiting me,
So, I'm just going to step back and wait and see.

WOW! i lovee that stanza ^^
It's COMPLETLY true. More girls should be realizing that we are young, so we have time. This poem was very inspirational to me.

5/5

This poem is very meaningful and has strong emotions ans character, I think you shoudl just be more confident in your writing. It's okay for it rhyme in some spots and not rhyme in others, it might not flow as well but it's your style of writing and that's all that matters

But my only tip is to make your endings a little more memorable and try to use more imagery :) good Job 4/5

I think that being young you are trying way to hard to find perfection. You are never gonna have perfection, yes you can have standards but understand that you also have to make an effort to be relationship. Taking the time to get to know someone IS work, no one ever said it was going to be easy, if you don't want to take the time to get to know someone how can you ever know if they are your definition of perfection, you are looking for it but not taking the time to see it. I'm not tellinjg you how to live your life, only take my advice if you want it.

As for your writing it was really good, don't worry about it rhyming it was perfectly fine. Your word flow was really good too. overall good job

Interesting poem. To be honest I believe you can do better. You showed your emotions but you cloud expressed them with more power, I want to say that on some places more poetic and unique ideas cloud exchange some obvious and cliche lines you wrote.
Other than that sweet poem, it though isn't my taste too much.

Woo, I FINALLY found a mistake!

Knowning. You mean knowing. Last line in the second to last stanza. :)

It rhymed? Lol, I think you're safe on the not rhyming part. Trust me.

I liked it. I wished there was more metaphors and such to make it more poetic though. To me it just looks like you're telling what happened instead of doing so in a poetic way.

Four out of five.

I thought this was really interesting and very good. I thought it was really meaningful and even though the flow wasnt "normal" who cares? its your poem. Its ok if it rhymes in some parts and not tohers. that makes it different and more unique than a lot of other poems.

5/5
Caitlin =]

That was adorable. it was smart. you are creative are simply good. i liked the ending. wonderfantastic!
you've got me creating words
lol

good job

Lexie

"I'm young, and I have so many years awaiting me,
So, I'm just going to step back and wait and see."

Really liked the ending (as a lot of people seem to have done!) I think most girls can relate to this poem in one way or another, at least I know I can! And I think this ending really summed it all up very well.
I dont think it matters that some of it rhymes and some of it doesn't, it makes it feel more like a continuous train of thought.
:)