by Tokin Jun 19, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A blackened sun in a purple sky, |
by aislynn
Moucha: not all poems HAVE to rhyme. these poems are VERY good and all you do is make them sound horrible. maybe you should try saying something NICE instead. |
by Mister 47
Mmm another time , the paragraphs , it si one block not good and teh lines sopme short some long , and the rhyming is very poor , |
I love this poem great job |