Dear my future wife

by waiting 4 some1   Jun 19, 2008


Dear my future wife whomever you are,
I am giving you my heart for free; you don't have to pay the toll
All what I am asking you for; please, don't treat it like a doll

Dear my future wife wherever you are,
Do you dream of me and wonder how I look?
Have you ever thought which fish in the sea will you hook?

Dear my future wife, where are you now?
Are you asleep waiting for your prince
To wake you up by giving you a kiss
Or are you trying to find me just like I do
And shout between the crowds "WHERE ARE YOU?"

Dear my future wife I have a favor to ask;
Take my heart and make its loneliness dissipate
Give it some warm love, make its roots irrigate
Let my heart dance out of happiness and relief
Let it forget all its sorrow, pain and grief

Dear my future wife, say Amen after reading this,
I pray that we will love each other forever
I pray that our love will not have "game over"
I pray that our hearts will play fair and we won't need a ref
That our heart beats will beat louder till they hear the deaf

Amen...

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Ive noticed some words that were forced to rhyme however didnt make a big impact at all. Ive noticed as well the irregular format of each stanza and it looked better and original. I liked the atmosphere of this piece, somehow light humorous. Good job..

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    ..AMEN..

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    The concept is very interesting. It's very sweet and romantic. A good poem of love and dream!

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Amen.wow, this poem is really amazing.when i first saw the title i thought that you are engaged, but when i read it i felt they are just dreams,so are you really having a futuer wife or they are just dreams.
    otherwise, nice poem.
    sorry my comment came so late.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    That was a such a lovely gesture n poem from the boy whom ppl say has a truly golden heart...

    This was marvellous Adel...

    Lved this one from u... n wish so the others n ur wife will love this if she wud read this one some day...

    Remember I still say... Someone, somewhere is reall made 4 u...

    Gud luck ur poems.. n ur words in the poem... all come true to u...

    Karan

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