This has more emotional content than I see in lots of work on here. Your feeling s for this girl are clear. You are willing to sacrifice it all for this girl. Ironically, she is someone you can't have, which makes it all the more intense. You portray this so well, the imagery is excellent.

Well done

Michael

Love ya too bro and this is another one that i teared up to. great job.5/5
**harlea

Wow this was a good poem dustin.5/5
$ lesthat

This is really good! i enjoyed reading it

Wow.. all the poems i have read are hot!!
for realz, 5/5! youre very talented!!
-keep it up<3

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