Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

Oooooooooh gave me chills.. this one really really made me smile.. i dont know why but it just made me smile like crazy.

excellent job.5/5

Twinkling stars speak a lot in their wn silent language....

Who knows wat they have in store for us humans... sum say they control our luck n faith...

I love them cuz they r faraway yet they r d clsest to my soul, heart, eyes n mind....

Loved this poem..

Keep it up

Best wishz... Karan

Ohmygosh. This is fantastic. I really enjoyed it. Love the amazing wording you used, and how perfectly it actually flowed to the tune of twinkly twinkle little star.

I love your word choice and the cleverness. It sounds good when read to the tune of twinkle twinkle little star. Beautifully done and on one of my favorite subjects!

Hello
I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
Thanks alot
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