Lookin
by Kierra Kemp Jun 19, 2008
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I look in da mirror n say wow i loook at my mom n say how i look at u n omg n i look at her n say y r u wit me i look at my child n say beauty i look at u n say hey lil cutie bt cn u tell me wat u c when u look at me |
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16 years ago
by SHYSTY23KO
Its pretty good!
i'd suggest putting in some comma's and periods and it might be a lil easier to read if you write out 'you' 'are' 'why'...
