"There is No corner I can turn"
-Oops, you didn't mean to capitolize no..

other than that, another great piece put together why two amazing poets. it's great to see that you get along w/ james. :] you two are making some great pieces up. this poem was filled w/ emotions and a clear point.. that there was no way to turn. well done both of you, 5/5.

Ill I have to say is wow. You guys gave me a great idea doing that. =]

so much emotions and strong feelings.
Nice I luv how it can be so deep within each short sentence. I luv it