Once upon a time it was you i adored...(short poem)

by ShootingStar   Jun 19, 2008


Cause at once upon a time it was you i adored.
you disappeared & left me here, out in the cold.
& the abscesses of you is hurting my soul.
didn't know there was an end of the road.
it was so easy for you just to let it all go.

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  • 16 years ago

    by InvisiblyHeartless

    This would make a really good stanza. Like, in a long poem. You should make an extended version.
    abscesses = absences
    I think this paints a picture with words.
    Amazing for something so short.
    5/5

    Lexie