When You're Gone

by Alexis   Jun 19, 2008


The days seem to drag on forever,
and the nights never end.
Either I am stuck in the twilight zone,
or my heart is broken
and needs to mend.

Everything seems off; Different somehow.
The sun doesn't rise quite right,
and the moon looks much duller now.

when you're gone,
it all loses its meaning.
It might as well not exist.
Everything starts retreating,
how can they resist?

When you're gone,
food loses its taste,
and words are just words.
The world becomes hazy,
and nothing is in place.

When you're gone,
I am a mess.
A wreck. A shamble.
Come back and catch me.
And we can finally rest.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Brennan P

    An amazing poem i know the feeling and emotions expressed in it all to much.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex Sparrow

    This is a beautifully expressed poem.
    I feel that I can totally relate to your words here,
    I feel the same way now that someone
    I care about in that way is gone.

    So, nicely done, I love your poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    How sad i know what it feels like to loose someone so close its a very lovely poem you are just amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Can Love Last

    This is a really beautiful poem...I love it!! I know how it feels to be this way...this poem completely describes how i feel about this guy i let break my heart three times! But yea this was totally amazing!!!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wishmaster

    Wow. Simply Amazing

    5/5

    zGouge

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