The hardest thing to do

by Lemon Square Bear23   Jun 19, 2008


He packed his bags
she couldn't help but cry
for the moment he were to leave
inside her heart,she would surly die

She told him she loved him
and begged him not to go
it was the hardest thing she had to do
let the one she loved,walk out the door and go

They hugged for the last time
said there good-byes
memories they had
flashed in each others eyes

All the times they talked
the pointless lasting fights
the good and the bad times
the late fun wild and crazy nights

the things he tought her
the small little things he said
all the jokes and laughs they had
the poems to her he read

Now that will soon be gone
no more laughs or stupid little fights
not a fun rode trip with him by her side
possibly a call in the middle of the night

He wiped away every tear
that fell from her sad face
she had no idea the fear he had
leaving her here alone in this place

She held him close,never wanting to let go
he told her everything would be alright
he got in his car and drove away
she watched til he was outta of sight

She waits on the porch
thinking he'll come back
its hard to face this world alone
especially when you heart is under attack

I wait for the phone to ring
no one can understands my pain
at night you can hear my cry
my tears fall harder than the rain

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  • 15 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    Wow, this is a very sad and emotional poem... I could feel your pain throughout the whole poem...
    This is so true, it is the hardest thing to do...
    Great poem!!
    -Jazmin

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I am sympathetic to the emotion behind this piece but as far as a poem goes it was cliche with many forced rhymes and filler words. The flow is off. I could say so much more but I don't want to take away from your expression of pain.

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    I deeply felt every line to the heart like a piercing needle, letting out my breath slowly. i can totally relate to your poem. i'm glad though that you have someone so special as him in your life to influence you positively. i only hope and wish the best for you guys no matter what you both go through. keep up the excellent work. loved it, loved it, loved it. i'd give you a 10 if i could lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow! you wrote this so brilliantly. i loved it.

    I wait for the phone to ring
    no one can understands my pain
    at night you can hear my cry
    my tears fall harder than the rain

    i loved this stanza, especially the very last line. very beauitful poem! i can relate, i love the way you write. keep up the good work! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This poem absolutely tore my heart out. Your structure and flow as excellent and even if it wasn't I was so lost in your words I would never have noticed..this is going into my favorites
    5/5

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