by real eyes realize real lies Jun 19, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I woke up one day and god knew i needed a friend for my life i thought was meaningless and i contemplated my death. |
by tigerdan
Your poem was very heartfelt. I like it. Keep writtin. |
Awwwwwww this poem ii can relate to some much its crazy.....this poem makes me feel better bout myself knowing im not the only one that feels like that.. it was GREAT! =D |
I agree with the previous comment |
by Ash
Nicely written. I like the fact that you have your own unique style. As in it's not full free verse and neither does it ryhme but you still have the talent to express your feelings through to the reader. And that is the most important thing. There are a few gramatical errors that thru me off while reading this one but overall I think it was a good job. Well done! |