Comments : All because he called me on that day

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Nicely written. I like the fact that you have your own unique style. As in it's not full free verse and neither does it ryhme but you still have the talent to express your feelings through to the reader. And that is the most important thing. There are a few gramatical errors that thru me off while reading this one but overall I think it was a good job. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    I agree with the previous comment
    but absolutely love this poem,
    I thought your words were amazing.
    They were so genuine and honest.
    You are an amazing writer
    and it would really have been a loss to throw away so much talent!!
    Always remember,
    its not our circumstances that make us
    who we are, its our spirits,
    You have a truly beautiful soul
    and deserve all the best..
    Great work!!
    ***Take care***

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Awwwwwww this poem ii can relate to some much its crazy.....this poem makes me feel better bout myself knowing im not the only one that feels like that.. it was GREAT! =D

  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Your poem was very heartfelt. I like it. Keep writtin.