Well lets start off with the flow of this poem, it was alright. In the beginning it was really good but then towards the middle/end it got a little rough. The feeling behind this though is very relatable and sends a message, that most people have felt before. I really liked this stanza:
It's almost like I'm running
To catch what I can never receive
Why did you have to lie
When you spoke those words to me
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Uhh! those were amazing
5/5

I love this poem a lot. Because, for the main fact.. that I've felt the same for awhile now. Giving up on someone who you had feelings for isn't very easy. I've been trying for almost a year now, and I can't seem to actually do it. It's not the easiest thing to do, but I hope that you eventually are able to. :) What a great poem, I'm glad that I could actually relate. It was a relatable poem in which I think not only me and you could relate to.. but so many other readers as well. Great job 5/5

I love this poem...
I can really relate,
and so can a lot of others.
Its not easy to experience something like this...

Great write..
5/5
..clever rhymes :P :]
Peace. :D

BOO! I MADE A COMMENT!
No really, I do like it.

When i read this poem it made me cry and it made me feel your pain. i give it a 5/5. im so sorry. i hope you feel better.

This poem is so amazing i loved it you are really good