Untitled four

by Brittany   Jun 19, 2008


I dont know why you went away, I'm sure we could have made it work,
I never meant to push you away, I just didn't want to get hurt,
But I guess it was for the best, things just kept getting worse,
Our love just kept fading with every cruel and hurtful word,
You knocked me down, I turned away,
We both gave up, we're both to blame,
I know we could have made it work, we just waited too long,
It was just a bump we could have gotten over, we just went about it all wrong.

***Hmm, sounds incomplete... But I'll leave it as is.***

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  • I like it...yeah its a little bit incomplete but there isnt much more you can add to it. i like it. i have had this happen to me before. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by MariaJose94

    Its incompletee, but its good! just try and make it complete! i liked it!