Comments : Greeting the Moon

  • 16 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    I luv this kind of style. this dark writing is something I like. ecspecially the moon. My favorite thing to write about. my favorite thing to watch. You did it justice.
    luvs the line with her pale hand =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I can't believe only one person commented on this poem. This was an amazing poem. Yet another amazing poem I read by you. You're a very good poet.

    "The stars of night are awakening,
    Though tired from their slumber.
    They rush to greet the rising Moon,
    With shine that never cumbers."

    I've never thought of the stars as if they were asleep in the day, and awakening at night to expose themselves for all to see. Thank you for opening my eyes to this, as well as other readers to this.

    "Graceful Moon, who changes form,
    Each time the month is new,
    Across the Earth moves her pale hand
    And leaves the morning dew. "

    Very good description in this poem. The ever changing moon, describing the earth and the morning, a new day. With the rise of the moon and when it falls creates a new day. Amazing poem! I loved this very much 5/5 for sure