Watch out for classrooms baby.. there dangerous!!!.. keep your eye on the learning.. loved your writing.. best read slowly and with some modicum of passion.. very visual.. regards.. vermont.. p.s. not bad for your age..

Very good for your age honey!! i was your age only 3 years i know howhard it it is to write really well!

I loved it...that reminds me on "his" eyes...I could write about them for whole my life :]
Nice poem...

Amazing i loveit, 5/5

Great job i love it 5/5!

Absolutely cute.....5/5...