by Poet on the Piano Jun 19, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
As I round the corner of the halls, |
by Lauren
I really like this. I think it has good fluency and wording. This poem is full of so much emotion. Confusion, anger, sadness, hate, and self-worthlessness, but there is still hope in the end. I like that. A lot of people can relate to this sort of thing. |
This is very well written. it's so sad that things like this happen, and if you had to go through this, i'm sorry. i know how painful that is. you did a good job conveying your emotions. excellent job. |
by Ignoris
Nice poem, very true to life. |
by Just Jade
OMG!!! i wish i could write somethin like that ... its so true ... i hate the girls at our school like that .... THANKS FOR WRITING SOMETHING FOR ALL US LITTLE PEOPLE!!!! |
by Matt M
I enjoyed reading your work, good job. |