"They are laughing at someone,
But who are they doing it to?"
-I don't really like the wording.. "but who are they doing it to?" maybe.. "Which makes me begin to wonder, who?"

I don't know. Just a suggestion. I'm not the best writer in the world lol.

"Then I hear my name said in disgust,
And my mouth drops open in shock,"
-isn't jaw drops the more common phrase? idk. mouth is good too.

"She has to be the ugliest girl alive,"
-oh, man. i hope nobody REALLY sad this about you. =|

"How can words have such a horrible affect,
And make you feel like a speck of dust?"
-Oh, I love how you worded this.. "like a speck of dust"

"I need to escape this horrible nightmare,
Before I hear them say any worse,
I have to run away this second,
Away from their cold words."
-nice ending. i love how you called it a horrible nightmare and how all these words they are saying are making it a near nightmare. this poem was amazing, overall. im giving you a 5/5. nice work =)

Wow.

Your a really good writer.

Seriously if this happened to you, I'm so sorry. Nobody deserves that.

Still a really good write.

5/5 for sure :]

Keep it up.

xx

This is definitely a 5/5! So well written and relatable to me! Love it...

Btw, thanks for your comment on my poems! ^_^

I enjoyed reading your work, good job.

OMG!!! i wish i could write somethin like that ... its so true ... i hate the girls at our school like that .... THANKS FOR WRITING SOMETHING FOR ALL US LITTLE PEOPLE!!!!
your an awesome writer:):):):):)

Nice poem, very true to life.
Good work!
Thanks for all the lovely comments on my work.
Ignoris

This is very well written. it's so sad that things like this happen, and if you had to go through this, i'm sorry. i know how painful that is. you did a good job conveying your emotions. excellent job.

I really like this. I think it has good fluency and wording. This poem is full of so much emotion. Confusion, anger, sadness, hate, and self-worthlessness, but there is still hope in the end. I like that. A lot of people can relate to this sort of thing.