by heather
Very well written. liked your meter in this.. lovely |
by Lizaveta
Sometimes we forget about all the beauty surrounding us. this poem has a great idea of the plenty little miracles around us. the descriptions are awesome, written with love and delight. |
by Lemonbread
I love how this poem is written =D |
What a beautiful poem of thankfulness for what we often take for granted,your poem flowed very well and is thought provoking. |
by Sylvia
You ask thought provoking questions in the first verses and then give us the answer with the last verse. An excellent read and very well written. |
by Ingrid
You are so right in all your questions..all these things are miracles and make our world to what it is now.. |