by Michael D Nalley Jun 20, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Do you love me or am I detested |
Another great write! This poem kept me interested and I really enjoyed reading what you wrote. Loved your last stanza, really ended it all well. Your emotions and thoughts were well stated here, so great job, keep it up! |
by sweet escape
Is is very short but very well writen....in my oppinion it takes a true poet to write a shorter poem than longer because you have to condence your feelings and thought into less words while still portraying the message. |
You have a peculiar taste and way of writing. its different. but i love odd things. so of course i like it. |