You have a peculiar taste and way of writing. its different. but i love odd things. so of course i like it.
lol nice flow. and nice wording.
interesting

Lexie

Is is very short but very well writen....in my oppinion it takes a true poet to write a shorter poem than longer because you have to condence your feelings and thought into less words while still portraying the message.
well done.
5/5

Another great write! This poem kept me interested and I really enjoyed reading what you wrote. Loved your last stanza, really ended it all well. Your emotions and thoughts were well stated here, so great job, keep it up!