Something and Nothing

by Kik   Jun 20, 2008


Nothing is the basis of everything,
Without nothing,
Something would not be in existence,
Resulting in nothing,
Meaning nothing would be something,
After it takes a cycle,
There would be no something,
Or nothing,
The concept would not exist,
Resulting in the virtue of life missed,
Because without nothing and something,
There would be no bad and good,
No heaven and hell,
No way to tell,
To tell whether or alive or dead,
Since there would be nothing,
Everything would be blacked,
In fact,
Everything is nothing,
A thoughtful attack,
Wait,
What's an attack?
When there's nothing to attack?
Then everything would be intact,
Wait,
Everything is nothing,
That's hard to keep tracked...

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  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    I liked this one. It's well written, for sure, and it's true. You have written a nice piece.

    5/5

    -Briana

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Nothing is the basis of everything,
    Without nothing,
    Something would not be in existence,
    Resulting in nothing,
    Meaning nothing would be something,
    After it takes a cycle,
    There would be no something,
    Or nothing,
    The concept would not exist,"
    -I love this, don't get me wrong.. but to me.. you repeated that .. with this thing not being something, ti would be nothing, and it wouldn't exist, twice. Hm. But, I mean, restating.. isn't bad at all. But when it's obvious... that's not very good. Sorry if I'm sounding cruel.. but it's just one of those things I've been told =) Or maybe you didn't restate it here, but it was a whole lot of the same thing to me.. Idk! Lol. Sorry for being so confusing. =(

    Wow. Excellent poem. and so very true! I love this poem.. it seemed like you just wrote it with the flow and thoughts off your mind just popped like that. This poem is great, and I agree with it again. I love your thoughts! Great work. 5/5

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