"Nothing is the basis of everything,
Without nothing,
Something would not be in existence,
Resulting in nothing,
Meaning nothing would be something,
After it takes a cycle,
There would be no something,
Or nothing,
The concept would not exist,"
-I love this, don't get me wrong.. but to me.. you repeated that .. with this thing not being something, ti would be nothing, and it wouldn't exist, twice. Hm. But, I mean, restating.. isn't bad at all. But when it's obvious... that's not very good. Sorry if I'm sounding cruel.. but it's just one of those things I've been told =) Or maybe you didn't restate it here, but it was a whole lot of the same thing to me.. Idk! Lol. Sorry for being so confusing. =(

Wow. Excellent poem. and so very true! I love this poem.. it seemed like you just wrote it with the flow and thoughts off your mind just popped like that. This poem is great, and I agree with it again. I love your thoughts! Great work. 5/5

I liked this one. It's well written, for sure, and it's true. You have written a nice piece.

5/5

-Briana