The Bird Of Freedom.

by Spoken Silence   Jun 20, 2008


** Not one of my best poems, I did write it on my phone in the car which made it a lot harder but. I saw birds and a plane flying close to each other and I came up with this. **

A bird can fly so elegantly,
Soaring up towards the sky.
Nothing can show more freedom than a bird.

Man craves to be like it.
Creating man made structures to be the same.
But a plane cannot soar,
Nor be as elegant or free,
They just get from point A to point B.

Man wants to be like the bird,
Jumping down onto the world.
For freedom is what we seek,
And the freest of the free is the bird.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Ooh, I love this. I love how you use a bird to symbolize something that has freedom. Nice work, =] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    For as long as man has lived, he has wanted the same freedom as the bird. The truth is he is weighed down too much with jealousy to be able to sucessfully take to the air.

    I have written poems on my phone too. They are useful for that!!

    Well done

    Michael