by Sora Jun 20, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I take a deep breath, |
by KelleyJo
I really like this! I LOVE music, so I can definetly relate! Great poem..keep writing! |
by David
This reminds me of the piano when i am playing this, this is so like a poem i made, lol. deja vu i say. lol. |
The words were rather simple, but as I was reading it I could hear this almost being sung. Maybe it was, because this was about music, but the way it made me feel was.. very peaceful, like swaying to music. I think complicated words would have messed that up. This was a really great poem. |
I like poems such as this, truly great, keep it up |