Comments : Pure Magic

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I like poems such as this, truly great, keep it up

    your servant:
    D. Johnson.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    The words were rather simple, but as I was reading it I could hear this almost being sung. Maybe it was, because this was about music, but the way it made me feel was.. very peaceful, like swaying to music. I think complicated words would have messed that up. This was a really great poem.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

    P.S. Thanks for the comment on my poem. x]

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    This reminds me of the piano when i am playing this, this is so like a poem i made, lol. deja vu i say. lol.

    loved it. reminds me of the past and hit a soft spot. 5/5 david

  • 16 years ago

    by KelleyJo

    I really like this! I LOVE music, so I can definetly relate! Great poem..keep writing!