by Elizabeth Jun 20, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
You are my dreams, My everything I wish to hold you tight |
by Josh
Hey, this is an excellent idea I love it; although, my suggestion is a few adjustments. In line two of the second stanza if I am correct "loose" should be "lose". Also, in the first line of the third stanza "your" should be "you're" and Im not sure that line in a whole makes sence. |