You were wrong

by im not the cause   Jun 20, 2008


Strawberry gashes
on my skin
i slowly kill
the pain within
crimson streaks
on my arm
no one else
will cause me harm
life's blood
almost gone
thought id live
but you were wrong

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  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Wow what an interesting way of describing the cuts as strawberry gashes. thats really cool and inventive, other may not be so open but i think it really different, I like that.

    Anyway this is a very well written poem and i give it a 5/5