Comments : Devil In Your Head

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    You're just another one in this false parade
    And the devil laughs in your head

    "The world is a stage "where we all sadly take part in "false parade"letting the devil get the better of us.Nice very nice insight to ones own soul.Loved the last stanza and welcome back.......keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Nice write!

  • 16 years ago

    by ReBecca

    I really liked this. I could really feel the devil leading me astray! I could feel the emphasis on the hypocrisy of portraying ones self to be different than what one actually is. Great write and imagery.