That was really really good- i liked the rhyming, great job, emotions were really good

Kevin, that was a good poem, i almost cried.....it was good, looking forward to hear more from you

The poem was really great,
keep up the good work

Wow... this poem makes me think ,that not all of the guys are FAKE! ...

Good job! 5/5

~Melody~

Hey this is a good write......
wonderfull.... 5/5 for that man.......
keep writing..... =)