Your Rerun Is Not Fun

by Independence Forever   Jun 20, 2008


::this poem is me venting from a happening on this site, it is not directed at anyone in particular, but if you think it's directed at you then it probably is::

love poem sad poem, that's all I see from you
I'm finished reading, I'm done, I'm finally through

will he this?, will he that?, I'm tired of the same show
you're predictable, is there anything else you know?

your life is one big sad love poem replaying on us
why can't you knock it off, why don't you trust?

when others try to help and correct you
you get mad and your messages spew

I'm through with your love poem mania it's so old
writing the same old stuff you're anything but bold

being a great poet is not staying in the same styles
try to span your range through many themes and miles

there's nothing special about you, you had your chance
but you blew it by wasting time on the same old dance

so enjoy monotony, relish your endless love comet
a fool returns to his folly as a dog returneth to vomit

so go ahead and get mad at me I don't care
maybe you'll even get better with my dare

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  • 16 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Haha. This made me laugh a few times. You're completely right, though. Change is sometimes good... people should try it more often. I hope the message gets through to a couple of people in my mind.. and probably on yours too.

    Overall Rating: 5.5/6 (specialrating)

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Funny man, good one. i like lots. Keep it up man. but leave me out of it. lol. jk

    Nice write from Poetry Knight

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I have been guilty of writing monotanous poems in the past. Since joining this site I have tried to change.

    Well, done for speaking out.