Kiss of Death

by Amber   Jun 20, 2008


Baby you took my breath
away. You took it away
with one sweet yet
poisonous kiss.

A sweet poisonous kiss
that sent my emotions
flying. It left my head
spinning making me
confused.

Kiss after kiss left
me feeling this way.
But after every kiss I
saw flashbacks.

What could this mean?
Why do I see flashbacks?
Why do I feel like my
soul is flying away from
me after every kiss?

I feel as if I'm slowly
falling asleep, But I fight
it because it felt like an
unnatural urge to sleep.

But then you smiled an
evil smile and said:
"Don't worry Baby it's
only the kiss of death!"

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Sweetness poem amber. the emotions in it are flyin.5/5
    **harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Can definitley relate, nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is rather like an addiction, being hooked onto a class A drug. You grow dependant on it, you love it, you dream it, you need it!

    Ultimately, it kills you!

    This is chilling, the last stanza drew goosebumps. Love the killer!!

    Well done

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Saw flashbacks.
    Since you have been lowercasing everything when it's not yet the beginning of a sentence I suggest you lowercase the S along with E in evil in the last stanza. Oh, and the same for the S in spinning.

    falling asleep, But I fight
    Lowercase the but....Never thought I'd have to say that. Lol. ^_^

    Other than that nice job. Most people love to be kissed and you took an interesting take on this. You made the kisses evil.....Mwa ha ha evvvillll kisses! Like the chocolate ones. :D

    Four out of five.

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