Saw flashbacks.
Since you have been lowercasing everything when it's not yet the beginning of a sentence I suggest you lowercase the S along with E in evil in the last stanza. Oh, and the same for the S in spinning.

falling asleep, But I fight
Lowercase the but....Never thought I'd have to say that. Lol. ^_^

Other than that nice job. Most people love to be kissed and you took an interesting take on this. You made the kisses evil.....Mwa ha ha evvvillll kisses! Like the chocolate ones. :D

Four out of five.

This is rather like an addiction, being hooked onto a class A drug. You grow dependant on it, you love it, you dream it, you need it!

Ultimately, it kills you!

This is chilling, the last stanza drew goosebumps. Love the killer!!

Well done

Michael

Can definitley relate, nice work!

Sweetness poem amber. the emotions in it are flyin.5/5
**harlea