Red Dirt Road

by InvisiblyHeartless   Jun 20, 2008


The stars yellow light shines
Natures glow intertwines
The moonlit red dirt path
Hidden and forgotten long ago
Past affairs hung in the air
Romantic connections carried
Fights left to decompose
On that dark and lonely road
The one no one starts out on
Alone.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Madison

    Nice writing its really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    In so few words you told a very deep story.
    I always love it when someone is able to do that!
    I love the words and the images portrayed.
    You did an outstanding job on this, bravo!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps: thank you so much for nominating my poem:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nate the philosopher

    Fantastic poem
    Keep up the good work
    Made me want more
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    Wow. I enjoyed every single word of that. But the one thing that I favored, were that stanzas. I loved the word choice. It was so unique and it really brings out your talent. You can tell this came straight from your heart:)

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Wow
    this is a really nice poem
    it reads well and is quite interesting
    i loved it (: .xxx

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