Unaware

by InvisiblyHeartless   Jun 20, 2008


The world spins around me
Motion continuing to move
Noise and cries errupt behind
I'm lost in this dream land
Yet it is a nightmare
I'm held in the bloody clutches
I keep breathing for one purpose
My unconfessed love for him
My time has come to give up
I'm not ready to leave him
Chalkboard fingernail screeches
An eerie voice hissing at me
Yet in he flies like superman
My true undenied hero
The coils of lies and cheating
Unwound from my ankles and neck
I'm no longer choking on love
I'm basking in its beautiful haze
The sunlight stirs me
It was the nightmare of a dream

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nate the philosopher

    I loved it
    Great poem
    So very sweet
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nate the philosopher

    I loved it
    Great poem
    So very sweet
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rinji

    I like this it was very well written a nice pros poem XD

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Aw, I really liked this one. It flowed nicely and I loved the words that you used to describe everything. :) I'm sorry that I don't have anything else to say, I'm in a hurry!! lol

    [5/5]

    ~Kail

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love free verse I aways envy those who can make a beautiful poem flow without a rhyme scheme as you have

    well done

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