I luv the structure of this peom.
My favorite stanzas:
Green is a color we need to survive,
Without it we suffer,
Without it we strive,
Without it we perish,
Without it we die.
Green is more than a color,
It's a supporter of life,
It's an ongoing strife,
It allows us to thrive,
It's a way to survive.
without it we die. its a way to survive.
strong emotion in those sentences.
I have to say again. I like this poem.
I forgot to tell you the first time. You took something that sounds so simple like any poet would. but the color green....why green?
I think you showed us that. made it into somthing more complicated but makes such more sense. green isn't just a color.