Comments : Green

  • 16 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    I luv the structure of this peom.
    My favorite stanzas:
    Green is a color we need to survive,
    Without it we suffer,
    Without it we strive,
    Without it we perish,
    Without it we die.

    Green is more than a color,
    It's a supporter of life,
    It's an ongoing strife,
    It allows us to thrive,
    It's a way to survive.

    without it we die. its a way to survive.
    strong emotion in those sentences.

    very nice flow, great work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    I have to say again. I like this poem.
    I forgot to tell you the first time. You took something that sounds so simple like any poet would. but the color green....why green?
    I think you showed us that. made it into somthing more complicated but makes such more sense. green isn't just a color.