I liek it.. theres just somthing about it I really like. I think its prob how you show it from both sides

Wow, Jen! I love the message in this poem and it really sounds like you are having a conversation over the phone and left out everything the other person said. Woah, girly XD This one is amazing! The flow was great and I just could not stop reading. I was addicted to this poem. I love the unique way you wrote this.. the way a conversation would have been. It was neat and how you left out what the other person would have said. Okay, I'm starting to repeat myself. Haha. But, it was great =) Dang. 5/5!