Nice job, I really like this!! You guys did a great job, and I liked the whole idea of this poem, was it a dream or not?

"I want to say it was more than a fantasy.
I just can't tell if they're dreams or reality."

Great ending, those two lines are sweet!

Nice work, please keep writing!

I liked the waay you're sure of reality, but then you're not.
that was really sweet. and cute.
(like me.jkjk)
i liked it.
good job

Lexie

This was really cute! I loved the contrast of emotions, too. Like, how you were certain that you loved him, but weren't sure if you even shared a tender moment with him. Very good.

Very good. At first I only read your parts but then I read all of it....its good both ways...good job. I like the vision of this too

-returningyourmello193

I loved the imagery that was created here with your words because I could imagine it all clearly in my head. You both took a even that happens to everyone and made it a beautiful epxerianced. It has happened to me many times that I wake up thinking did that really happen or was I dreaming? You both did an amazing job and your styles complimented each other.

My thing that rubbed me the wrong way was descibing his lips as soft in two places. Try using a different word like gentle or something like that.

Other than that beautifully done you two!

*5/5*

Aww !! Nice poem, you've both done a great job with it. It was surely an enjoyable read.

I understand what you are going through. i give it a 5/5