Nice work, i love this section. you can put anything here. i think it needs another chapter. but this poem could have been a love poem. well thats my interpetation on this poem.

fav lines were:

Love has given her wings, so she must fly.
But she's interrupted by all the pain that willl not subside.
She's haunted by all the tears,
But his resentment keeps coming back, trying to interfer.

you really set the scene. loved this to bits. bravo! 5/5 david