Comments : Run Deep: Part Five [Final Chapter]

  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Hello
    I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
    I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
    You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
    Thanks alot
    Love

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Hey darling,
    I thought this poem was so beautiful
    your words were absolutely beautiful.
    This was amazing,
    the words you used were
    all perfect,
    I love it, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Can Love Last

    I read all five of these and I think they are all very beautiful....i love they way you made all five go together!! I love the way you write!!