Hey there Jim let me say i liked the flow and rhyme of the poem,although it saddens me to see you hurting.It's a perfect display of your emotions and very well written.

Grant

I like the flow.and i do have to agree with grant.and your right.it does relate me.well.5/5.=)

Nickie

I loved it, it makes me sad that you feel that way but writing this was a good way to get it out, it went straight to my favorites

Beautiful (:

I hope this isn't what you are going through at this time. Most your poems are upbeat or at least positive. This was done so well. If flowed so easily and was an emotional read

You captured the feelings that I have at times. My emotions go wild and I have no way to express them verbally without causing WWW III. I to have been in the streets but managed to get away from them to never return. The sad thing for me was that I did not have friends to pull me away. As you can see, this write touched me.