Thanks to you.

by Lemon Square Bear23   Jun 21, 2008


I take the razor to my skin
a drop of blood falls,
memories flash through my head
but in this case id rather be dead.

I'm not going to chicken out
this time I'm going all the way,
this pain is more than I can bare
and no one seems to care.

you have no idea what I go through
before you judge me, walk my path
I laugh and smile out all of my pain
thanks to you, I'm gonna shoot out my brain

Now I'm done, I give in
hope your happy
nothing mattered that you said
and now thanks to you i am now DEAD...

I'm not sucicidal

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  • 16 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    This poem is great!
    I am glad that you are not suicidal and this IS a great way to let the anger out!!
    Great job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by vivian robb

    Wow. this poem is so good!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I didn't think you had it in you. nice write from Poetry Knight.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very powerful and with a lot of feeling, quite sad though :(
    but never the less good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kevin

    You are already insaine... DONT DO IT!!! what would I do w/out u buddy!! good emotion in ur poems. way to let it out. just no suicide please!
    Kev.

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