Comments : Wild Horses

  • 16 years ago

    by InvisiblyHeartless

    Thats really sweet.
    great pictures and imagery.
    nice wording too.
    i love it a lot.
    im going to read more of yours later.

    Lexie

  • 16 years ago

    by Madara

    So, so , so truly and nice. Really like it! ::)*

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "And as you kissed my forehead,
    You whispered, "I love you so."
    -I think this line would sound okay without And.. idk.. it can be there, but i don't think it's necessairly needed.

    "And I came to realize that
    Wild horses couldn't drag me away... "
    -excellent. i finally got the whole part about the title being "Wild Horses" yay. :) This poem was extremely amazing. Very beautiful and sweet. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Aww this is such a great poem
    you have done a great job... keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I like this one... it's sweet and makes me smile... really good one dear. 5/5

    ~Rave

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Aww this poem is so cute. The imagery you used was fabulous.

    "You held my hand in yours so soft
    Your voice sounding so bright
    As I crawled in bed beside you
    And whispered goodnight."

    ^^^ This is my favorite stanza!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is very well written I enjoy happy endings

    very romantic
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    That was a beautiful poem, u really do express your feelings well! nicely written
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I liked this one alot better, it's really cute