I found a nice connection in this piece, sometimes when you read a dark or depressing poem, it's kind of uplifting in a way, cause you know that you arent the only one that feels that way, and i can relate to this piece in so many ways...the first stanza was pretty much gold...the second through me a little, the 1st and last line just lost me, (but i get confused easily), the 3rd stanza made the whole poem for me...it was very strong and complete., and on a side note, where do you get one of those "happy coins", i need one of those :)
great write, i'm glad i read it, you did a wonderful job.
john