I really loved this poem. it's such a sweet idea to compare your lovestory with Cindirella fairy-tale and with movies, still emphasizing that there is something different and unique in your story, something that you rrelly value.
the structure of the poem and the order you tell things is well-done
sometimes rhyme is not thorough but the rhythm is the same so i think it's ok
5/5

"You've probably read about Cinderella,
And believed about fairy tales,
Hoped for a prince charming,
Had a clear description of him in details..."
-Woah. Nice start! This is like the best you could write this. It caught my attention and wanted me to keep reading. Because, I could totally relate! I kept saying yes... yes... as I read it XD

"Hugged a pillow as they embaraced passionately,"
-Embaraced? you mean embraced? =)

"I've somehow won you yet feels like we're apart..."
-Maybe rewrite it like;
"I've somehow won you, yet it feels like we're apart..."
I'm not exactly sure were you'd want the comma. And, I think you need it before feels.. because you left that out =)

"Our story is like a movie or a fairy tale,"
-Nice simile, and this comes straight from the title, which is amazing. Nice job =)

"I believe that some things are meant to be,
Will you make my dreams come true?
I really hope you do,
Because you know how much I love you... "
-Aww perfect ending!!

Overall;
-This poem was really amazing.
-You had a awesome flow going.
-Rhyming was great, and not forced.
-A few mistakes, but not many at all. :]
-Great work
-5/5

A nice blending of life and the fairytale.. At times your rhyme scheme changes(stanzas 6&7), purposely? There seems to be no metre or rhythm here and without rhythm it becomes unpoetic.

I really liked the last two stanzas, mainly because they are exactly how i feel about a friend of mine.

great poem 5/5