by Dustin S Jun 21, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I cry, I bleed, I try, But now I really need. |
This is really good.... |
That last stanza was pretty cool. It wasn't a bad poem. The rhyming was pretty good too. Some parts could be better. Over all four out of five. |
by X Harlea X
Wow.... um yea dustin... we needa talk bout this... and i mean really this time. |